On this revision, I incorporated the other characters in the water with the crocodile. I removed selected areas of foilage that were mostly distracting the overall piece. The shape tweening in the intro was changed from the 'obscure plant' to a more abstract shape. The FPS were changed in areas as well. I made the intro a bit faster and then changed the easing of the crocodile, turtle and fish. I think this has a nicer and smoother transition. A mask was added in making the water rise so that it is no longer just free floating. I decided to keep the foreground water and just lightened it up a bit. I think the revisions make this piece much stronger.
Monday, September 22, 2008
:: Revised Final Landscape ::
On this revision, I incorporated the other characters in the water with the crocodile. I removed selected areas of foilage that were mostly distracting the overall piece. The shape tweening in the intro was changed from the 'obscure plant' to a more abstract shape. The FPS were changed in areas as well. I made the intro a bit faster and then changed the easing of the crocodile, turtle and fish. I think this has a nicer and smoother transition. A mask was added in making the water rise so that it is no longer just free floating. I decided to keep the foreground water and just lightened it up a bit. I think the revisions make this piece much stronger.
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3 comments:
I think your revision worked out for you. The retraction of the plant elements helps with the eye movement across the stage.
The alligator and the new animals are nice. glad to see the alligator more relaxed and not moving so fast.
the beginning is all excited and the end...its like they all are just chillin. It seems as something freaked them out and they all ran away and now they are cool again,lol. works otay for me :)
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